tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-50733128066416659.post2917908643787747752..comments2024-03-12T00:40:58.754-07:00Comments on Susie's Sentences: Autumn and GhostsSusie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-50733128066416659.post-2956651265829558762013-10-03T16:29:54.935-07:002013-10-03T16:29:54.935-07:00You nailed this... The beginning line is pure desc...You nailed this... The beginning line is pure description and PUTS us there. The collar up, stirring of regrets (brings us back to the imagery of the stew)... all well done!Margarethttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00007201357693227614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-50733128066416659.post-56236908491109074002013-09-27T16:23:44.334-07:002013-09-27T16:23:44.334-07:00me too - autumn smells of regret... and ghosts
gr...me too - autumn smells of regret... and ghosts<br /><br />great 55ruthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16012181529786952855noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-50733128066416659.post-86469055921959585812013-09-27T09:39:16.321-07:002013-09-27T09:39:16.321-07:00Thank you Hedgewitch. I am trying my hand at prose...Thank you Hedgewitch. I am trying my hand at prose. Perhaps someday I will attempt a short story.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-50733128066416659.post-7171641070431847832013-09-27T09:38:08.965-07:002013-09-27T09:38:08.965-07:00Alice, it is definitely a time of hauntingAlice, it is definitely a time of hauntingSusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-50733128066416659.post-68070403164290256242013-09-27T09:37:43.536-07:002013-09-27T09:37:43.536-07:00Thank you, yes it certainly seems to stir the ghos...Thank you, yes it certainly seems to stir the ghosts for me.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-50733128066416659.post-87056130729563984972013-09-27T09:36:49.297-07:002013-09-27T09:36:49.297-07:00Thank you so much KerryThank you so much KerrySusie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-50733128066416659.post-59205597608110243282013-09-27T09:36:15.048-07:002013-09-27T09:36:15.048-07:00Thank you so much Mary.Thank you so much Mary.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-50733128066416659.post-85043728812997520332013-09-27T09:35:53.654-07:002013-09-27T09:35:53.654-07:00Thank you Brian...I enjoy autumn also, but it does...Thank you Brian...I enjoy autumn also, but it does feel like a time of ghosts.Susie Clevengerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09239990133754328967noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-50733128066416659.post-82010460471564153012013-09-27T07:54:38.430-07:002013-09-27T07:54:38.430-07:00Yes, they sleep, but the fall air can definitely m...Yes, they sleep, but the fall air can definitely make them restless. Sometimes it's not just leaves that blow in the wind of autumn, but memories. Enjoyed the switch-up to prose poem, Susie. And thanks so much for your kind words and support at my place. They mean a lot to me,.hedgewitchhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13090696134322515899noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-50733128066416659.post-16901154932543476742013-09-27T07:07:02.245-07:002013-09-27T07:07:02.245-07:00I know what you mean. There's a basic melanch...I know what you mean. There's a basic melancholia to the season that raises specters of the past, and it's not just the damp chill.Alice Audreyhttp://www.aliceaudrey.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-50733128066416659.post-64269969100252099502013-09-27T06:59:52.439-07:002013-09-27T06:59:52.439-07:00Fall will certainly do it. There's just somet...Fall will certainly do it. There's just something about this time of year that stirs the ghosts.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-50733128066416659.post-37957528710676902972013-09-27T06:20:03.190-07:002013-09-27T06:20:03.190-07:00I love how your last line underlines the significa...I love how your last line underlines the significance of the season for the speaker.Kerry O'Connorhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00720862912375945249noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-50733128066416659.post-71818013482903423312013-09-27T05:05:31.656-07:002013-09-27T05:05:31.656-07:00Susie, I felt the chill of autumn in your words; a...Susie, I felt the chill of autumn in your words; and I think many of us have inner 'ghosts' that appear at this time of year! A vivid 55!Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07366010389846904663noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-50733128066416659.post-58716004666767188872013-09-27T04:52:26.535-07:002013-09-27T04:52:26.535-07:00nice...the boiling over stew of autumn is a very c...nice...the boiling over stew of autumn is a very cool image susie....the regret & ghosts, the season def is evocative of those as well...nicely done...<br /><br />i rather like autumn though...smiles.Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-50733128066416659.post-801706108950614302013-09-26T22:39:09.358-07:002013-09-26T22:39:09.358-07:00Susie...
It's just that simple,create a magic ...Susie...<br />It's just that simple,create a magic moment in time and emotion in 55 words.<br />Yeah Right...:-)<br />Only you succeeded gloriously and perfectly!<br />I really liked the shade of gray you've given us<br />Fantastic 55<br />Thank you for the visit, thank you for this little Gem<br />and please have a Kick Ass Week-EndG-Manhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14968807697181554781noreply@blogger.com