Sep 13, 2013

Karma's Bitch

All dressed up in lies and glitter, Dani wipes the dance floor with broken hearts. She gave a brief thought to having pity upon those brazen enough to ask her to dance, but Karma had called her to be the bitch to bring men full circle to face their errors. It shouldn’t be such fun.


This is my first time writing Flash 55 for G-Man. It seems Karma has been drifting through my writing the past few days...hope it is an omen for good. :)

15 comments:

  1. Love this! I'd say it's a stellar first effort. Hope you come back to play every week.

    I've known a few people in my life that I swear they are acting on karma's behalf. It just makes me wonder what I was like in my past lives...

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    1. Thanks so much! I haven't written much other than poetry and I am going to spread my wings.

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  2. Oh, nice write Susie. This makes me want to know more! And it also makes me think of the line, "Karma's only a bitch if you are." Lol

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    1. Thanks Mary. Perhaps I will write more about Dani :)

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  3. Ha! I wonder if this really is how some think--it makes sense to me, and explains a behavior that has always mystified me. Nice one, Susie, and I like the layout of this blog very much also, with the tabs to all your pages--very cool.

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  4. Susie...!!!!
    Welcome to the Friday Funfest!
    What a fantastic Maiden Voyage Young Lady.
    I know this chick in your story, she's everywhere.
    I Loved your Perfect 55
    Thank you so much for visiting with such a cool and creative contribution, You are welcome to visit again and again...:-)
    Have a Kick Ass Week-End

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    1. Thanks G-Man! I am looking forward to returning and seeing what my muse will come up with.

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  5. Susie, welcome to the world of the 55. I loved this. Yeah, karmic payback is probably got to be the most fun payback of all! Awesome 55. :)

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  6. Dani sounds like QUITE the character indeed, with her own very special mission! Glad to see you at the 55, Susie.

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    1. Thanks Mary. I was happy to take part in it.

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  7. Karma's only a bitch if you've been treating her bad.

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  8. Fun, and it makes me want to go dancing. Welcome to Friday 55!

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